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11-10-2006, 10:57 PM
| | Member 3d Stalker. I can see you. | | Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Texas
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| |  my portfolio website is up,come tell me what you think
http://www.cryingdiaper.com/
i want to start applying for a job soon,
you guys think my work is up to par,be honest,
also is the name of my website to strange,
let me know something,Thanks,Chris^_^
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08-12-2007, 05:49 PM
| | Member 3d Stalker. I can see you. | | Join Date: Jun 2007
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Hi
I think you could improve it a lot by doing the following
1) Produce a low poly version of the alien head, and bake all the information from the original onto this one.
2) Same for the next two charcters, maybe shows some close ups of the areas with more detail like the face and stomach
3) Perhaps increase the poly count in the handle of the first gun as it looks a little a bit too blocky, also because it looks like an old style gun add some signs of ageing like scratches and chips
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08-12-2007, 06:08 PM
|  | Hotkey Master ARTIST | | Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Why?
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You should also mention the girl model is the Eva Wilde Tutorial set that you are following. Putting tutorials on your portfolio has never been something I would do but at least give credit to the people you are using it from.
The guy with the gun at the side is a tutorial also I've seen. I'm not exactly sure what is on your 3d stuff that isn't tutorial based. You might want to actually do some work that is 100% yours and not from tutorials. It will show your creativity and ability to do work without being taught how.
D3D
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08-12-2007, 06:26 PM
|  | Detective Inspector Morse ARTIST | | Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Nottingham
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The 380 tri box thing could be improved - you've got lots of segments on the sides that you could get rid of and probably bring it below 300 tris!
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08-12-2007, 08:04 PM
|  | Ferocious Simplicity 3D addicted maniac | | Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Derby
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i agree with D3D try adding some work that is 100% your own. I also noticed the fish character is from the digital tutors maya in production dvd set.
I think there is no harm having tutorials you have completed on your site but back it up with some of your own work and make sure you credit the authors of the tutorials.
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08-13-2007, 01:41 AM
| | BANNED WANKER. Seeker of 3D wisdom | | Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: St Helens
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I have to agree more work of your own maybe a little animation here or there, better styling of your website and your name is a bit strange try something different, i dont know anything with studio in the title or something which suggests your a high grade artist for hire. some finished renders a short film for potential employers. id like to see a car aswell its all good work though your doing something atleast, are you looking for modelling/texturing/animation development like for movies and games?
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