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Old 09-29-2006, 12:25 AM
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factory interior WIP

I know i've got a bad track record for not finishing things but school demanded i make this so here it is.

heaps still to do i know but here it is so far. this project will end up being animated and have a sound track as well (not promising it'll be brilliant though.

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great start there snorkle. just some things i've noticed, the bricks on the wall on the left look a little stretched. and with the big rusted wheel on the left it looks like you have given it a planar mapping and stuck a rusted texture on it. may i sugest unwrapping it and textureing it by hand, this way you can get rust where rust would form. if not thats cool.

i looking forward to seeing this thing finiahsed mate, keep it up


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Old 09-29-2006, 10:57 AM
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hmmm yeah i think you might be right about those bricks i will attend to that, as for the unwrapping i might if i get time i'm trying to get through this course (which is very basic and doesnt require unwrapping only basic uv maps) so i'm not to fussed if things (like abnormal placing of rust) pop up although it would be nice to go over it all and unwrap. thanks for the comment though.

seeing as your in sydney eagle you've probaly heard of the AIE i'm doing a Cert III there, basic i know but i need it for entrance to the melbourne campus next year
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Old 10-02-2006, 11:40 AM
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Just check out there website http://www.aie.act.edu.au/index.php there is a link of to the melbourne campus on there but the course site is the same for both. I can't vouch for it at all but i'm pretty sure it's the only thing like it in australia so thats where i'm of to

sorry eagle canberra/sydney i forget how far apart they are i think of them as "right next door" my bad.
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if you want a really good course look at MAD academy http://www.madacademy.com.au/ i have heard some detremenental things about AIE, as i cannot confirm them i dont want to publically announce them, if you pm me i can tell you more.



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