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Old 10-04-2006, 04:06 PM
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My first models

Hi guys. Here are my few models so what is your opinion

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Old 10-04-2006, 04:11 PM
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wow, great stuff mate, the minigun is looking great, you've nailed that tutorial dead on, the bus is looking great. oh and welcome to the forum.

keep it up mate, there are many more things to model.



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They look like nice clean models.

Here's a suggestion though - mount the gun on the front and back of the bus and administer some bus lane justice.
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very nice models, but these should be in the WIP section really. hope you decide to texture them, then post them in the finished works section, because i'll be moving the topic to the WIP forum
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Tire and rim ( left image mental ray renderer, right default scanline )

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Old 10-08-2006, 11:44 PM
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That's it pepsi can is finished. Next i planed to get more complicated in this, and model a car. It's not going to be some first class (audi, porsche...) but something simple for beginning.


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Old 10-09-2006, 03:27 AM
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nice pepsi can if you model a car dont do it in this thread do it in a different one like name it New project car model or somethign that way you will get a lot more critique.
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Give your can some texture!
Could be a nice start to learn texturing. You can find all sorts of can labels, just google it.
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