Goth Chick (warning flat boobs)

[Revliss]

here the concept art

she low poly so there is no smooting goint to use normal map on her (Zbrush)

here the back render i did not have the new back render upload so this will have to do for now



head render









front render





that will be all for now i update went i can Red cat out............

[Chaoticon]

The model wire looks clean, and the model looks pretty smooth for being low poly. Can't wait to see the normal mapping and texturing. I don't care for the chosen gradient so much though.

[sandmanninja]

dude - love Gothic chicks!

Soo... I'll ..er..keep a close eye on your work...

hehehe

[Xadeko]

cool

some things,

to start she looks way to beefy compared with your concept. Take a look at her ass for instance.

i do like the head!

Then looking at the wire you have alot of faces that do not give it any real detail. So you can remove those and clean it up a bit.

Looking at the thick wire at the hips, are there 2 edges right next to eachother? if so weld those. Since you will be useing a normalmap you can use that to add the detail.

I do not know what kind of poly/ face count you are aiming for?

good look rev!

[Revliss]

ok got the up date here






now if only i can fine out how UV her

[Xadeko]

I would finish the mesh first

It looks like it can use some more work and a cleanup first.

[Demoniq]

Nice model. I like it.

Athough I would change some things like for example ass. It COULD be a little thiner. And of course the boobs Make them a bit more round and not so flat.

Waiting for changes :P

[Elbaz]

im not sure, are you building this to be smoothed?

If not, then I would ditch A LOT of the polies on the back and around the joints in favour of a simpler deformation loop, as they are not adding anything to the shape whatsoever.

proportions looks ok, although the head is a bit sylized, but you may want that :P

keep it going.

el.

[Revliss]

ok did heavy clean up
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Elbaz thx for the tip and Demoniq thx for reminading me to flaten her boobs more

[Xadeko]

there are still alot of faces unused, you created a new line above the hip..and also the lines down the spine, and the one at the hip still exists, weld those.

the back did become a bit nicer