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Old 01-19-2007, 08:31 AM
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Corpulent character

Another concept for the game. I haven't done any significant work on the arms and legs yet.
There's a lot of small details buggin me I can't seem to get right, the nose is awkward looking and the manboobs are kinda lumpy among other stuffs.

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Old 01-19-2007, 09:06 AM
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I don't know anything of character modeling yet but I like the setup...
he simply fat ugly and horrible...
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Old 01-19-2007, 01:38 PM
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Hehe nice one

I like the third chin
Waiting for the textures...
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Old 01-19-2007, 03:54 PM
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what a fat bastard!
a 2nd chin... oke... but a 3rd! :|

try removing some of those polys in the head and place those in the deforming parts like his fingers, knee and elbow, they seem to need some more to deform well.

Also try to use the verts you have to push in some more shape or just weld them together so you spare some more faces. Also flipping edges in the arm may help,

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This is the ugliest post I've ever seen on here.

Keep it up.

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Ah, so those self portrait references that OlBlue supplied are working out well then...

Looks good mate
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mmmm man boobs :P
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Backside update.

I had a fun time looking at reference photos of ridiculously fat naked asses.

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I had a fun time looking at reference photos of ridiculously fat naked asses.
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Now that's worth laughing over.

Looks good.

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Backside update.

I had a fun time looking at reference photos of ridiculously fat naked asses.
Ah, the lengths to which us 3D users will go to get the job done just right...

As for the model... horrible, but in a good way!
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