Old Scene - Dacia 1301

[Lunaticu]

Hello guys! I`ve posted this before here, but i got preety ill and stoped this for a month or so.

So i`m at the final stages with this one, i textured the interior, and made some tweeks.

Please give some criticism!!!

I still have to work on the sewer texture and the gate a bit.

So please help me out on this with constructive criticism.

[Clum-Z-Boy]

Do you have bump/normal maps on the car texture? That rust could be just a tad sharper.

Also, maybe a very discreet specular map would give nice results.

Can't think of anything else, looks great!

[Kristopher_Lee]

I'm having trouble getting the pic to open in a new browser.

I can't tell if you added that dumpster or not. So til then, I'm not happy with it

D3D

[Lunaticu]

This is the link...

http://www.slibe.com/memberimage/11a...dacia_scena21/

i added one attached to the pole

and thx for the good tips Clum-Z-Boy

[spludge]

That's fantastic. My father-in-law has got one identical to this. Same condition and everything.

It looks real already but a few cig butts or some litter would make it really convincing.

[Kristopher_Lee]

Yeah ok.

Looks really good but its still lacking something. I dont know what it is. It just doesnt have that extra ''umph'' that gives it that realism. It looks like a 3D model. Maybe its the textures on the signs and fence?

You've done a great job tho.

D3D

[Lunaticu]

Hello guys... thanks for the replies and for the compliments.

I did follow your advice and made other textures for the sign and fence, made it a galvanised metal, i saw a similar fence at a friend of mines,(also the sewer cap, posted on another forum, that guy thought it was a bit to greysh, needed more brown), i made the windows more dusty, i modified the rust that comes from the bolts(it should go only downwords, mine went a bit up too, hardly noticeble).

I will make trash here and there, add a cola can, and ciggarets here and there.

I hope you like the update.

Please give some advices if you have, guys! Thanks.

[Kristopher_Lee]

Its looking better man.

A little more crap around and some tweaking on the materials and lighting and you'll have a great piece.

D3D

[Bertie]

I think the sewer cap could be done with being more 3D. In english I mean it looks a little flat, so maybe add a bump map or geometry on the top to create the cross pattern you normally see on them.

Other than that nice work

[Hooper]

HEY! ..no photographs allowed!


serioulsy though....looks pretty damn good to me.

(It does look like a photo from further away. )

Only thing besides what has been already mentioned is the white wall on the left...a little too clean for me...but then again, I can't make renders this good.