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Old 05-28-2004, 02:14 PM
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3ds-rebaz often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
a charater from monster inc

hi everybody
i modeled a character of one of my favourit film which is monster inc .


this is inside the program




also the rendered product

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Old 05-28-2004, 03:05 PM
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Boundy often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
thats looks really good but doesnt it seem a bit dark.

i remember when watcxhing monsters ink that character had slightly brighter skin and his eye was very bright white aswell.
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Old 05-28-2004, 03:36 PM
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Shinobi often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
agree with his Eye , but looks good so far.
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Old 05-28-2004, 11:08 PM
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KLC often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
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needs to b rounder... more ball shaped and less egg shaped.
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Old 05-29-2004, 01:51 AM
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iLKa often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
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Agreed with above comments.

He is a bit fatter (the arms and legs) than the original.

Have a look at this,

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Old 05-29-2004, 02:00 AM
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Shinobi often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
You can simply scale him down a bit ...that would help
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r9onaldo often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
The body and the eye should be more rounder.
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captainchet often steals bootlaces found at the side of the road
looks ok, but the eye socket looks like it can't hold the eye, try making the socket rounder and less jutting at the bottom, right now it looks like the eye would just fall out of the socket.
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