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Old 07-22-2007, 07:11 PM
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Raptus' Dreadnought WIP

Well I've been following Cris' Superb Tutorial set and I thought I'd Start a W.I.P for it.

Heres what I've Done so far

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Old 07-22-2007, 07:54 PM
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Nice start

What are you modelling it in?
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It looks very good!
I like those small iregular details thingies on the shin.
Guess I need to order the dreadnought tut soonish
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Modelling it in max, I am going to cover all the armour with the wartorn look so he doesnt look so clean
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Just currious, is those details on the shin part of the dreadnough tut?
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no, it isnt (or at least im pretty sure it isnt...)
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Looking good, but you went a bit overboard with the dents :P
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Looking good, but you went a bit overboard with the dents :P
I like the details on the leg but as BasOne said, it is just too much.
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Personally I am not too sure about those dents as it makes the shin look more like Concrete than metal as metal just doesn't dent like that.

Don't get me wrong I think the details look great but just aren't suited to the model you are applying them too.

This is only my point of view so if you like it, keep it

Keep it coming mate
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After thinking about it after a while I think I agreed on the dents and I'll try to think of something that looks more war torn as I go along. I Thank you all greatly for the input.

Anyways its not much of an update but atleast the bottom half is done.
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