WIP Lo-Poly Fish

[anchik]

Hi,

I'm a beginner. Looking for advice on what would be the best thing to improve on. What needs most improvement, modeling-wise? I'm studying organic modeling.

Anna

[ragupasta]

Really good start mate. However you can remove quite a lot of the loops around the lips and still get a good definition and shape.

[zero_hour]

ragu's right, the mesh desity on the lips is too much compared to some other parts, there are also some bits yuo can do to improve the mesh quality in places, ill do a quick paint over now

done, btw thats says "target weld" as you should try and keep it as quads as much as possible

also i dont know whats going on at the back by the fins, it looks a bit messy in my opinion

[Zerflag]

if you're planning on animating it, you don't have nearly enough resolution on the tail or the fins.

[anchik]

Thanks for the great advice, I'll be sure to use it!