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Old 09-14-2008, 10:44 AM
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Storehouse [WIP]

Hello guys and galls ! I`ve been away from the world of 3d for about an year now and it felt like forever... reason was that i was in my final year of high school and I had to learn to draw so i can attend architecture(faculty). So it was study and draw for me for one whole year and i reached my goal, i managed to graduate and then took my faculty exams and joined one of the best architecture faculty in my country. Now, i`m ready to start again doing what i like most.. cg!

This is a storehouse + a WC(2 in 1) from our backyard which will be soon demolished because it belonged to the previous owner of the house and because it`s old and cranky There will be a lot of objects to model and texture so i hope you`ll enjoy it + tweaking the actual model. This is what i have so far, not much but it`s a start. Please leave your comments and some critique while you`r at it! Thanks.

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P.S. I will work on the angle and of course on the lighting. Render quality : medium-low
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Old 09-14-2008, 08:03 PM
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Since is Sunday and i have more time to myself i decided to work some more on this... i put a cut tree in... a drawer and some stuff...

hope you like it!
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Old 09-15-2008, 05:40 PM
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Worked a bit today on it... not much because i`m studding for my drivers license(exam is a few day ahead so wish me luck!! )

Added some wood on the top of the "house" (it`s purpose is to keep the roof in it`s place, doh`), added some flower cans, 2 hammers, some batteries, the door to the loo (which i`ll detail further on) and some nails(stuff will be hanged from there).

More to come, keep an eye out!
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looks nice, but should the roof have more ripples?
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looks nice, but should the roof have more ripples?
Didn't see that before but I agree with him. Still a pretty good scene so far though.
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Thanks fellas! I see what you mean... but i went and checked and they are about the same size as in max... probably time and weather flattened them.

I haven`t had a chance to work more cuz i have the drivers license exam tomorrow... so wish me luck!!

More stuff added.. fixed stuff.. well you`ll see here:
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ahh ok then if that how it looks in the ref image then no problemo and good luck with you drivers exam
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Thanks man!

Well... since i`m busy with moving and buying stuff for my new place near the faculty... i find less time to do 3d.. but i try to fit in some hours whenever i can... can`t wait to settle and work on this "full time"

Did 2 textures... but i still have to work big time on them... but tell me what you think about them... and added few objects.
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This is turning out great, im really liking it. I think that the edge of the corner next the the door is too straight, even though the texture is very worn and dated, the cornor looks too perfect.

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thanks... yea you`r right... i`ll fix that asap ^.^
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