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Just a quick post to show, some of my work, here is a WIP of a game asset AUDI should get it finished and textured on monday . Any C and C most welcome.

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the mesh is a bit messy, try to keep the spaces between the polys as even as possible and also its a bit early to crit on the car but keep it up.
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the mesh is a bit messy, try to keep the spaces between the polys as even as possible and also its a bit early to crit on the car but keep it up.

i wouldnt worry too much about the spaces between the polys even, the thing i would try to focus on is getting very smooth flowing poly lines, if you are following a ridge of the bodywork, you really want to have it as smooth as possible. takes some time with just eyeballing it, but get them smooth and it will make a whole world of difference


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thanks I done some tweeting and now trying to texture it, mmm now that is the hard part
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