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Old 10-06-2008, 12:48 PM
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feeling a bit more confident with my modelling abilities so im attempting to make this car this is my progress so far
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looks nice, just some advice because i had a problem with it when i modeled a car. Be careful were the edge of each panel meets the rest of the car, because when you try and render it you can get a pinching effect, i found it helped to keep re-using the prior edge of the panel by duplicating it and extruding it etc...

you might be fine i cant tell for sure in your screenshots
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Old 10-07-2008, 10:20 AM
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ill post wires maybe that will give you a bettter look whether ill encounter those problems
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did afew minor tweeks
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are u modeling it panel by panel? the only real issue i can see is where the door meets the back of the car, just because i can see a gap. the best way to explain it would be to assign a really shiny car like material and have some thing reflect of the car near the door area. on a real car the light reflected is in a smooth straight line. i know your model is still at an early stage, but it is best when modeling the rear of the car to start from were the door ends. i find duplicating the door then extruding from that to make the base of the rear end mesh. then you will have a smooth mesh.

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the tutorial shows you how to model a lamborghini in 3ds max, the technique the guy uses is all about re-using a panel to make the next panel, i would give it a quick look, might explain it better than i have

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Old 10-09-2008, 02:46 PM
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dont worry about the rear its cause i meshed smoothed the door and left the rear like that when i smooth them booth it should be ok
now i want to make the hed lights but unfortunately i have no idea on how im going to do it can anyone point me in the direction of maybe of a tut
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Remove the shiny paing scheme murambai. Reflective paint looks awful without a proper lighting rig, bounce cards and all the trimmings, and you want to save that until your model is finished. Modeling looks pretty solid so far.
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thanks open
yeah everyone is complaining about the lighting but im still a novice there so until i get better this are the last scenes you will see like that
anyway worked on the back i just need to iron out my mesh to make it less bumpy and the back should be done
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worked on the back abit
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